Essential Question: Can I invite others in to see the world through my own original poetry?
To jump straight into this unit at the beginning of the year was a challenge for me. I had always shunned poetry before because I had a preconception of poetry being very opaque and hard to understand. However, this unit was a big eye-opener for me, because only through this unit was I able to get in-depth with the exact connotation and nuances of every word of a poem. The first time we shared our poetry with each other was a harrowing experience–I felt scared that other people were going to see what I wrote from the bottom of my heart. It felt like I was being exposed and out in the open, but in actuality, all of my classmates were very kind in giving me constructive feedback and compliments where it was deserved. After this first poetry-sharing session, I felt a lot more at ease inviting my peers to see my poetry. My first poem, “The Summit”, kind of missed the point of it being a personal introspection piece because I focused on the dramatics of the moment. I thought that the poetic techniques used in “The Summit” were quite simplistic and weren’t able to convey as much meaning as I intended. However, I conveyed a highly visual experience through the wording of “The Summit”, and is something I hope to continue working on because it is an important skill to paint an accurate picture of one’s mind through poetry. My second poem, “Lost In A Book”, was my first attempt to look into myself and reflect on one of my favorite past times: reading. I employed a wide variety of metaphors and similes to create abstract and concrete imagery to show my thoughts about reading a book. The stanza divisions were meant to separate ideas and to reflect on different aspects of reading a book. However, I realized that this poem was still a bit lacking in the structural department–that is, all the clever techniques (not necessarily ideas) that poets use to make their poetry more enticing and gripping to the listener. Through the writing of these two poems (an activity I had rarely engaged in before), I became much more confidence and found enjoyment in taking these small steps into poetry. My second poem was a better attempt to capture my own perception of the world–perhaps my worldview–which is something that is intensely personal and not available to be observed by anyone else. Writing poetry has taught me the intimacy in this form of writing because of its loaded and condensed form. Long prose can be very explanatory, whereas poetry forces the poet to try to embed meaning through a careful picking of vocabulary and organization of structure. I believe that this unit has taught me what it meant to invite other people to see the world through my eyes with poetry, and these writing exercises have helped me get better at it. I hope to be able to hone my poetry writing skills in the future as well, as I had greatly enjoyed doing it in this unit.
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