12/9/14
My planning sheet of Mrs.Jones
My Draft of Mrs. Jones
My Replanting Mrs. Jones Formative
My first Summary of Scooby doo ———> img-Z08125627-0001
My Harold holt Essay
My My one paragraph summary on Scorpia Rising
My Poem
My Journal
My Nomination and press conference ——————> img-316110450-0001
My success essay 13042015135612-0001
HOW TO USE A COMMA
In this sentence, if you take out the word Bobby and the two commas, sentence would still make sense. “My sister is lazy”
In this sentence I used a conjunction and a comma to link two independent clauses together. You can say I would like to go play badminton. I have homework to do.
In this sentence we are addressing dad in particular, so we put a comma, then our object is more specific, if we did not have it, it would be “Lets eat Dad!”
In this situation, this comma is not always used well, this is known as the Oxford comma, or the Serial comma. This is made to stop list confusion people get in fights about this thing.
When I wrote this, I used two adjectives to describe my self, but I had to put a comma in between for it to make sense.
Hi, My name is Bob is the introductory phrases, but I need a comma there to indicate that it is an introductory phrase.
Today I am going to be speaking on how to punctuate dialogue because it is a simple thing that people always misuse.
There are two different types of dialogue, there is interrupted dialogue and non-interrupted dialogue. Simple, right? It is good to incorporate both of them into your story.
I shall give you a short dialogue between Mary and Fred.
In this exchange of speech. what is said is out lined in brackets, signifing the fact that THOSE EXACT WORDS ARE BEING “SAID”. If you do a thoughtshot, then you must do it in Italics.
If you saw this and spotted it, you would find that the punctuation mark is outside the quotation mark when Mary speaks, THIS IS INCORRECT. You need to have the punctuation mark before the quotation mark.
You need to make a new paragraph everytime there is a new speaker so you can avoid confusion over who is speaking.
If it is a conversation between two people, it does not need Mary said, Fred said, Mary yelled, Fred Shouted, Mary screamed and so on. You can go on and on about that. PEOPLE DO NOT LIKE TO READ THIS.
So… That is it for me now, and I will speak to you later about the new Grammar problem we have in my Language Arts Class.
Hi guys, when we were doing our summative our teacher said that we had a lot of tense problem and the pictures that I show you today are about …… TENSES,(obviously)
Here you go!
Hi! I am going to be talking about sentences…
Here are a few photos that can explain it, Because I am lazy. (That was a compound complex sentence.)
1 Simple sentences
2 Compound sentences
3 Ways to make a complex sentence
5 Compound complex sentences 
4 An example of an complex sentence 
6 Conjunctions for compound sentences
7 Examples of a compound complex sentence
8 a complex sentence
I am sorry if you did not get this(Simple sentence) If you need more help go to this link.(Another simple sentence)
COLONS
Salutations
lists
sentences
Only used after a complete sentence: then u can clarify or expand
Only Capitalise proper nouns
to check trade colon with namely
FULL SENTENCE:LIST
IN SALUTATIONS
DEAR BOBBY,/:
Amir Summative(It was a mere summative)
https://docs.google.com/a/hkis.edu.hk/document/d/1j8eUx-LZbmTmmEBJCFfWZsp6n2dhSyW0g8L33rIhP6o/edit
This link above is the worksheet I had to do for visual literacy
William Shakespeare
What do you already know about William Shakespeare? Take five
minutes to record any information you think you know about him
and his achievements.
-made words
-uses weird language
-died and born same day of year
-english
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Use the websites below to help you answer the following
questions:
LIFE
http://www.bbc.co.uk/history/people/william_shakespeare
What was Shakespeare’s date of birth?
23,4,1616
Where was he born?
Where did he go to school, and what was it like?
What do we know about his family?
Why did he go to London?
With which theatres and companies was Shakespeare involved?
Who were Shakespeare’s contemporaries?
When did he die and what is special about this date?
What did he leave his wife in his will?
GENRE
http://www.storyboardthat.com/articles/education/english/types-of-
shakespearean-plays
How many plays did Shakespeare write
What three categories can we put his plays into?
Name two plays from each category.
Today, I have two goals to share with you guys, it is my Reading and my Writing Goals, My writing goal is to make Edit my writing and go through it at least 3 times to ensure less Errors and better writing. My Reading goal is to read slower so I can update my WWW (Wonder words wall) every so often
These are my quarter 2 goals and my goals are to pace myself and to accomplish the 30 books to meet the ME Standard and the writing goal is to get to see at least all ME with one EE or more.
YAY I HAVE GOTTEN AN ME IN MY GOAL PRESENTATION!!! img-401110534-0001
Hi guys, I am back and with my new Goals!!! (woot…) My writing goal is to be more consistent with my tenses (red purple blue). I would know when I had done this when the Powerschool has a ME+ In the Conventions part.I plan to do this by the end of SEMESTER 2,
My reading gaol is to Meet the ME standard for reading with 30 books along with doing my WWW so that it has words on it, (red purple blue)and I will know this when I have a ME in powerschool. This grade will be graded by end of semester 2 so I need to do it by the end of Semester 2.
SnakeHead Martyr Some one who is killed because of their belifs Crocodile Tears Botch
Informal: Carry out (a task) badly or carelessly
Correspondence A close similarity Anti-radiation Non-Radiation Braziers
a portable heater consisting of a pan or stand for holding lighted coals.
Tartan Wool cloth with checked marks on it Bonnets A woman‘s or child’s hat tied under the chin and with a brim framing the face. Gilt Covered with gold paint or gold leaf, as a decoration.
Tenants A guy who lives on the land of a land lord. Hassock A thick cushion or a stool. Podiatrist The treatment for the feet Heiress A female heir Trousseau
Mafiya Inconprehenisible(can’t pronounce) THE DA VINCI CODE Parquet A floor design made of many different wood blocks arranged in a geometric pattern Cipher A Secret way to say a certain message Impeccable No Faults at all Cryptic Very mysterious Pinnacle The most successful point, eg. career Sangfroid Coolness under pressure Zealous showing enthusiasm for a certain matter Foist an un welcome signs Scepticism To doubt the truth to something Exodus A large amount of people departing a certain place Unorthodoxy having a different method or opinion to the majority Bereaved sad because of death of close friend Schlockmeister exorbitant
Inferno
Benevolence
the quality of kindness
Tutelage
the right to be someones guardian
Surreal
wierd
myopic
short sighted
cajoling
to persuade by flattery or coaxing
elide
to merge
deception Point
candor(candour)
the quality
cynic
ramifications
aplomb
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