Question 1 Final Draft

For my Question 1 final draft, I definitely improved from my first draft but since this was our first in class writing, this was not at the level that I feel satisfied with. Specifically, the text for me was incredibly hard to understand within the time frame, so I found it difficult to decipher. Thus, from my entire rubric, I wanted to only include a snippet of what I received in order to highlight the good that I achieved within this paper.

 

 

Links to previous draft: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1d2aJ_tA19vxPDwRoQ9C-hi5AdLIWEYReh0xstbVfQnc/edit?usp=sharing

 

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