Q3 In Class Writing

I am really happy about my work for this essay, because I’ve written about “Night” by Elie Wiesel twice beforehand and this is the highest I’ve ever scored. In fact in the previous two times, I received a 4. In this essay, I received a high 7. I think it’s because of how many Q3 prompts I’ve practiced as well as feeling more comfortable with the prompt.

Below is the rubric and the comments:

Question 1 Final Draft

For my Question 1 final draft, I definitely improved from my first draft but since this was our first in class writing, this was not at the level that I feel satisfied with. Specifically, the text for me was incredibly hard to understand within the time frame, so I found it difficult to decipher. Thus, from my entire rubric, I wanted to only include a snippet of what I received in order to highlight the good that I achieved within this paper.

 

 

Links to previous draft: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1d2aJ_tA19vxPDwRoQ9C-hi5AdLIWEYReh0xstbVfQnc/edit?usp=sharing