Link to script and planning document:https://docs.google.com/document/d/12WXJJ67cFTOpFnbPf-PowHDepAXwvBSWzBQruRCqykY/edit?usp=sharing
Mrs. Brayko’s Comments:
Olivia, This holds together quite well. I like how focused you got and that you were able to bring in your textual evidence effectively. The paper was easy to follow and included much good analysis (and a better sense of zooming in and out). Future focus: Nuancing your sentence structures to put the emphasis in the right place – more so on the development of the theme than on the techniques being utilized.