This is the link to the PDF version of the first draft that was given for peer feedback!
The link to the FINAL Draft #2 of my Short Story Interpretation of “Where are You Going, Where Have You Been” by Joyce Carol Oates
The link to the revised (rewritten) version of my SS interpretation, which is Draft #3
Mrs. Brayko’s Comments Reflection
I think the rewrite of my SS Interpretation really paid off because when I got the feedback the first time around for Draft #2, there were many targets I had missed or I hadn’t had considered when writing the essay. I also felt after reading my 2nd draft that there was a lack of organization but I also found that I lacked some persuasion and analysis. In the 3rd draft, I worked on tightening my essay to make it more coherent as well as making sure that I and readers could follow my line of reasoning throughout the piece.