Grade 8 Writing

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Persuasive Essay Summative

I am happy with my work overall I could have tried to get an EE by adding more information. Inside the essay I did not cite my sources correctly so I should work on that too.

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Literary Techniques Assignment

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After

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Everything Has Its Cost Summaries

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Summative Essay: Literary Devices in The Outsiders

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Overall, I think I did well on this assessment. I had a good hook and introduction, I organised my information well, and I used transitions effectively. However, my conclusion could have been stronger, I had a few spelling errors, and I forgot to add citations.

 

May 20, 2016 – Modern Macbeth in Texting

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Double Entry Journal May 31

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Macbeth Witches Compare/Contrast BrainFrame

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