Grade 8 Writing

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Reflection: I think that a strength that I had in this essay were the points that I used to prove my main point and the amount of specific details that I added to support it. I think that next time I need to cite more sources and get references from different reliable sources.

 

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Approaches to Learning^

Dystopian novel summaries

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The Outsiders Literary Analysis Essay

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Reflection:

In this essay I think that I was very successful with the way that I took action on feedback. Whenever I got feedback I would immediately try to fix it and I think that it turned out to be quite successful. In addition, I think that I was able to organise my essay well enough so that each paragraph was structured the same way and that the whole piece flowed correctly.

 

I wish I had more variety with sentence structure. Sentence structure was something that I tried to vary in this essay but I wish that I could’ve spent more time looking at my sentences and analysing my conventions. In addition, there were a few spelling errors that I did not catch but next time I would like to make sure that I go through my writing enough times so that I am confident in my spelling throughout the essay.

 

Modern Macbeth Text Messages

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DEJ Summative

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Macbeth Brainframe

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