In this writing piece I felt really good about my content. I explained everything clearly and I stated my facts well. One thing that I always am not very good at it editing. It showed in this piece as I got an AE on my language. Persuasive Essay Reflection: When Looked at the edited paper I was disappointed as it was slightly better than my other essays but the essay still looks like a sea of blue(or black, whichever pen she is using). One thing that I did,’t do is write formally. There are a couple spots where I should’ve used more formal words. For example I said gonna, instead of going. Another thing is that I did not cite my sourced enough in the piece. Almost every paragraph there is a place that I need to cite. Overall I did better that my other writing pieces but i’m still not there yet for getting all ME.
I feel like i should’ve took more time to grade myself and think about it. As i got some of my grades wrong. On this page i should’ve put more pharagraphs to show that it was the conclusion. On this page i could’ve took more time editing and reading aloud. I should also try and finish the draft earlyier so i will have more time to edit my piece. I felt like i did okay on this picture. I feel like i did a good job grading myself as i was mostly correct. For my story i could’ve listened to it more along with reading it aloud because then I wouldn’t of gotten some of the silly errors that i have. Same with this one, I should’ve looked over my work. I also should’ve explained more in my answers along with reading the question. I feel good about this one as I got a ME