Grade 8 Writing

Photo on 6-6-16 at 1.58 PMPhoto on 6-1-16 at 12.13 PMIMG_0610Photo on 5-16-16 at 12.15 PMIn this writing piece I felt really good about my content. I explained everything clearly and I stated my facts well. One thing that I always am not very good at it editing. It showed in this piece as I got an AE on my language.     Photo on 3-17-16 at 1.59 PMPhoto on 3-17-16 at 2.00 PMPhoto on 3-17-16 at 2.01 PMPhoto on 3-17-16 at 2.02 PMPhoto on 3-17-16 at 2.02 PM #2Photo on 3-17-16 at 2.03 PMPhoto on 1-11-16 at 12.17 PMPhoto on 1-11-16 at 12.18 PM Photo on 1-11-16 at 12.19 PM Photo on 1-11-16 at 12.19 PM #2 Persuasive Essay Reflection: When Looked at the edited paper I was disappointed as it was slightly better than my other essays but the essay still looks like a sea of blue(or black, whichever pen she is using). One thing that I did,’t do is write formally. There are a couple spots where I should’ve used more formal words. For example I said gonna, instead of going. Another thing is that I did not cite my sourced enough in the piece. Almost every paragraph there is a place that I need to cite. Overall I did better that my other writing pieces but i’m still not there yet for getting all ME.

Photo on 11-5-15 at 12.07 PMPhoto on 11-5-15 at 12.07 PM #2Photo on 11-5-15 at 12.07 PM #3Photo on 11-5-15 at 12.08 PMPhoto on 11-5-15 at 12.10 PMPhoto on 11-5-15 at 12.10 PM #2Photo on 10-14-15 at 11.09 AMI feel like i should’ve took more time to grade myself and think about it. As i got some of my grades wrong. Photo on 10-14-15 at 11.10 AM #2On this page i should’ve put more pharagraphs to show that it was the conclusion. Photo on 10-14-15 at 11.10 AM On this page i could’ve took more time editing and reading aloud. I should also try and finish the draft earlyier so i will have more time to edit my piece. Photo on 9-21-15 at 11.18 AMI felt like i did okay on this picture. I feel like i did a good job grading myself as i was mostly correct. Photo on 9-21-15 at 11.18 AM #2   For my story i could’ve listened to it more along with reading it aloud because then I wouldn’t of gotten some of the silly errors that i have.     Photo on 9-21-15 at 11.19 AM   Same with this one, I should’ve looked over my work. I also should’ve explained more in my answers along with reading the question. Photo on 9-21-15 at 11.19 AM #2   I feel good about this one as I got a ME

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