Animal Farm IBN #2

In this version of the story, Boxer does not die and he starts his own revolution called Boxer’s Rebellion. Boxer’s Rebellion, Chapter 11: The creatures looked from pig to man, and from man to pig, and from pig to man again, but it was already impossible to tell which was which. Boxer, with his eyes all teary and blurry, said: “Comrades, I never thought it would come to this but” He broke off to wipe a tear from his eye, “It seems that it would be time to start a rebellion of our own.” The animals fell into a sullen silence after that. No animal had ever even dared to think about the idea of a rebellion. But how, how will they beat Napoleon’s dreaded dogs? The dogs that had created so much fear among the animals. Boxer raised his frail hoof: “I know that Napoleon has his dogs, but I have seen these dogs, they have grown fat and old, they will pose a minor threat.” The animals looked uneasy. Boxer then said: “Comrades, there was a time when I would say Napoleon is always right, but I was sorely mistaken. He is not right, Napoleon is wrong!” This was met by a cheer from all the animals. By now, the pigs had noticed that the animals were gathered outside the house. Napoleon was about to give orders to the dogs but he found that they had all drunk themselves to sleep. Napoleon called the pigs to line up with their whips in formation. With one accord, they marched out and begun to whip the animals. “Charge, fight for what should have been won years ago!” Boxer cried. The animals charged. At first, it seemed like the pigs would have won, but they had grown fat and accustomed to power. As soon as the animals got close enough to strike, the pigs turn and fled. The problem was, they were too fat to even manage a very fast shuffle. The men in the room had seen this scene unfold and had sneakily snuck out the back door, not before grabbing some of the money on the table. The pigs were caught and killed in a gruesome manner. The goose, driven by rage and hatred, broke the necks of the pigs with their pure strength. After the battle, Napoleon was hung on the barn. The seven commandments were changed back to their original text (they did not kill ALL the pigs, that would be genocide) The animals raided the stocks and took all the food. They remembered this day as Boxer’s rebellion. A picture was painted on the barn. It was Boxer, fighting off 10 dogs at once and underneath it was written: “Remember Boxer’s Rebellion!” This would be marked as a special holiday on animal farm. The animals were happy, for now.

Blog post 2 January: Lone wolf

CHERUB: Lone Wolf By: Robert Muchamore IBP post:


Operation: Lone Wolf

Briefing writer: Robert Muchamore


Drugs are everywhere. They are the money making factories in the crime underworld. Drugs do exist but there are people who make money by stealing other people’s drugs. When a drug lord gets some of his drugs stolen it is called a “Rip-off” This is very dangerous work as the drug lord may have lots of contacts and might try to kill you. It is also safe because I don’t think that any drug lord would call the police to report stolen drugs. Your mission is to get in with one drug rip-off artist called Fey. You are to investigate her and the people she rips off. When you gather enough information from her, you report back and we make arrests. Remember, you are allowed to do criminal things as your criminal file will be wiped as soon as you are finished with your mission. Although you are allowed to make trouble, you should not put your life at risk. If we need too, we will pull you from the mission. You are to meet Fey in a correction center. You are to blend in with Fey and become her friend. After you are released, you are to stay with her and investigate. Another agent named Ryan will be on an accompany mission with you. He will blend in with one of the drug lord’s kids and investigate there. As Fey had ripped this drug lord off once, she will have information regarding his workings. You two are to work together to bring this organisation down. This mission has been classified as high risk. You are permitted to opt out on this mission any time. Accept at your own risk.

**Mission briefing extract**

***Any attempt to remove this document/steal this document will be classified as a crime punishable by a life sentence in prison***

CHERUB: Lone Wolf. Reading response January.

Fey’s first drug rip-off.

I am really nervous. My aunt said that it would be fine and that if I sticked to the plan, everything would be fine. I shifted my weight, my job was to distract the man in the house by vandalising it a little. My hand was clutched on my rock. I threw it at the window where this fat man was watching T.V. The rock bounced off the window. I knew this would happen as this was a drug safehouse. The fat man turned to look at the window. When he decided that the klunk must have been in his imagination, he decided to go and get some chips. I got my carton of eggs out. I creeped to the window and slipped my knife into the lock. In a few tense moments, I had managed to pick the lock. I opened the window and threw all the eggs into his room, then I got some spray paint out. I spent the next 2 minutes decorating the room with graffiti. I waited until the fat man got back, he saw all this then saw me. I started to run away. I knew that he had no chance of catching me. I led him down an alleyway where my aunt was hiding. My aunt jumped out and hit him in the head with a brick. He was knocked out. I fidgeted with my knife as we waited for him to come arround. When he finally did, my aunt grabbed him and forced a pistol to his head. “Follow me, resist and I shoot,” my aunt hissed into the fat man’s ear. Instead of negotiating that without him we would fail like a smart person would, he just went with us. My aunt and I made our way to the safe. The fat man was sweating, this felt exhilarating. I felt like a million pounds right now! We got to the safe, my aunt pushed the fat man down. She said 2 words: “open it.”

The fat man gulped and shakily said: “You–I have friends in high places. I–They will kill you! Cut you to pieces!”





“Open it.”

He opened it. Inside was a giant pile of 90% pure cocaine, I tested it. The worth was about 450,000 thousand pounds. I don’t know about my aunt, but I loved this.

Sure, I might get caught but the thrill is just too hard to resist.



Overall. NaNoWriMo was a very painstaking experience. I thought that I had one story in mind but suddenly I thought of something else and the original idea did not sound as good. Coming up with an idea was quite easy, I had a ton in my head. It was about a week into it then I decided to stick with one idea and keep with it. Updating it was quite hard because I would come across multiple writers blocks. When I did update it I was not very happy with what I did. It was a good experience because I leaned something about myself. I’m terrible at consistency. That is a skill I need to work on. The end result was very short of what I had hoped. I wanted to write 10,000 words but I only wrote 3000 or so words. I decided that the piece I wrote was not my best work and I don’t have the energy to rewrite it.


James Adams briefing

*This is about James Adams as a character*


Subject: James Adams

Age: 14

Status: CHERUB agent

James Adams is a spy, there is no other way to put it. They were trained, yelled at and abused to be spies. What is their advantage over adults? They can pass through any security system unnoticed. Adults never suspect children of being spies, they are invaluable to the British intelligence. James Adams has completed 4 highly successful missions around the world to infiltrate and dismantled some of the most feared drug kingdoms, terrorist groups and had managed to stop an entire war. 

“Although he is a great spy and can operate under extremely stressful environments, but he is a complete yob”- Meryl Spencer, mission control operator. James Adams ability to do missions well has gotten him much acclaim over the years but in campus, he is known as the troublemaker. It seems that he is always under constant inspection of all the teachers. The only teacher that does not yell/scream/give detention to or demand late homework is his maths teacher. He is friend with Kyle “the  weasley business man” Blueman, Bruce “Chuck” Norris and also many other people (you may notice that they all get into trouble often). His is currently single but had a brief affair with Kerry Chang.

He is currently in a mission in palm high. He is uncovering a criminal organisation which is involved with stealing cars and selling them back into public, for a lot of money. He is also trying to delve into a corruption case in palm high.


Romeo and Juliet by William Shakespare

Act one scene one: the stupid capulets decided to pick a fight with the montages. Blood and stuff came and lots of people were hurt, the prince broke it up and said that if it happened again, they would be killed, all of them. Romeo was not there but when he came back. His cousin found that he was in love and his cousin was about to tell him what happened but Romeo did not want to hear it.

Act 2 Scene three: Romeo finishes snogging Juliet and goes to friar Laurence so they can get married. Friar Laurence was picking flowers. Friar Laurence does not want to at first but then finally agrees. Romeo is overjoyed.

Act 2 Scene four: Crucio starts to tease romeo about him falling in love. When the nurse arrives, he teases the nurse. The nurse gets really angry and starts to call them names. She seeks presence with romeo and romeo tells her that he is getting married. The nurse gives the approval.

Act 2 Scene five: Juliet is waiting for the nurse’s arrival. The nurse gets back really sad. The nurse starts to stall to make Juliet really angry. The nurse finally says that she was to be married in Friar Laurence’s cell. She is overjoyed.

Act 2 Scene six: Romeo is waiting for Juliet. Before Juliet comes; the Friar says that you should only love moderately don’t go all out. When Juliet arrives, they start to snog but the Friar stops them. They start to get married.

Act 3 Scene one: Lots of fighting, Crucio picks a fight with tybalt while tybalt was trying to find romeo. Crucio dies, tybalt runs away and romeo tracks down and kills tybalt in a duel to the death. Romeo gets sad over it.

Act 3 Scene two: The two houses go and tell the prince what happened, lady capulet wants romeo dead but the prince just exiles him. Romeo throws a tantrum and tries to kill himself. Romeo and Juliet spend one last night together….. wooh, we know what happened there… heh heh, ugh.

Act 3 Scene three: Juliet weeps for Romeo but lady capulet thinks that this is for tybalt and how he was not avenged. Lady capulet says that paris is gonna marry her on thursday. Juliet flatly refuses then capulet comes home and gives her a good beating. He says that if she dosent marry Paris he is gonna disown her. Juliet asks for nurse’s advice. The nurse says that she should marry paris. Juliet pretends to agree but goes to the friar for help.

Act 4 Scene one: The Friar and paris are making preparations for the wedding. Juliet comes, paris teases her to see if there is any reaction. Juliet would rather die than marry him. Friar makes a plan. Juliet will be put to sleep but it will look like she is dead. The friar will send a message to romeo that says what is really going on and that Juliet is asleep. When Juliet awakens. They will go off happy ever after RIGHT?!?!??!?!?!? OF COUSE NOT! SHAKESPEARE KILLS THEM ALL! THANK YOU FOR THAT DEPRESSING STORY.

Act 4 Scene two: Juliet tells her dad that she want’s to marry paris. He is so happy that he moves the wedding to Wednesday. Juliet drinks the poison. Ugh, shakespeare, why?

Act 4 Scene three: The nurse finds out that Juliet is dead. The friar send the message but is very slow. Bathasaur finds out the Juliet is “dead” and speeds past the mailman that was supost to deliver the letter.

Act 5 Scene one: Buthasaur gets to romeo and tells him that Juliet is dead. YAY! Romeo rushes back and gets poison. They pass the stupid mailman and speed to Juliet’s grave. Romeo wants to die.

Act 5 Scene two: Romeo gets there and he sees Juliet dead. He drinks the poison and dies next to Juliet. The Friar gets there and comes to get Juliet out but the prince’s men come. Juliet suicides. In the end, the prince says: “hey, your stupid hates made them die. This is all your fault”