Grade 7 Writing

What I think I did well on my narrative was my overall story and my language. I am also proud of the conclusion and the opening paragraph, as they sum up the story really nicely. However, there were somethings that weren’t too good. I always add a period at the end of commas, which is wrong, but it didn’t really affect the story too much. I could also work on using more precise and descriptive language in sentences. Also, as a side note, I need to watch my language.

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Rubric

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Narrative Summative

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What I think I did right was making you feel like you were in the story and focusing on the action. I really need to work on making the story stay in a word count and the conclusion. I believe that the conclusion wasn’t very good.

 

 

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Narrative Checklist

Narrative Formative

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Rubric

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Narrative

What I think I did right with this narrative was my sentence fluency and the conclusion, as it overall had no mistakes. I really need to work on my overall story and using precise and deep words, instead of basic ones.

Narrative Formative 2

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Writing Poem

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Formative Essay

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Essay Plan 1

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Essay Plan 2

Mystery Formative Writing

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Summary Example

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Summative Essay Rubric Page 1

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Summative Essay Rubric Page 2

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Essay Summative Page 1

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Essay Summative Page 2

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Essay Summative Page 2

I feel that this essay was great, and had minimum problems with it. I would like to improve on spelling, and also adding more precise and accurate explanations.

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Oral Presentation Rubric

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Champions 3 Poems and Rubric

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3 Champion poems

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Champions Essay Page 1

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Champions Essay Citations

My Champions Essay was pretty good, I only had a few issues. The things I did right were sentence structure, spelling (mostly), and just the essay in general. The issues I had were mostly grammar mistakes and spelling. I also need to use much stronger vocabulary. I made some silly mistakes in my writing, such as misspelling assistance and using some weaker words.

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Sonnet Grade 7

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Sonnet

What I am proud of: I am proud of the sonnet I wrote, especially the meaning of my words and the words I chose. I am very proud of the way I conveyed the meaning of my words, such as placing them in the right order and making them mean something.

Challenges: Definitely a challenge that I had to face was following iambic pentameter, like the rhyming scheme, the stressed/unstressed words, and 14 lines. Another challenge was trying to use new words that would also show the message and also rhyme with other words.

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